4\5!
I actually thought this was pretty decent. It reminded me of some black and white newspaper strip but I can't remember which one.
Simple, short and sweet!
Well done!
4\5!
I actually thought this was pretty decent. It reminded me of some black and white newspaper strip but I can't remember which one.
Simple, short and sweet!
Well done!
Thougtful.
Really well done! This should be scoring a lot higher than it is!
You created a really nice mood. I would argue, though, that it is the girls who reject him that are the fools. He would offer them his art and show his sensitive side and they would throw it back in his face. Shame really, he seemed like a nice bloke.
Those girls are probably in abusive, unfullfilling relationships with drunk boyfriends by now moaning that they never met a nice guy.
I really do hope he finds someone and soon.
Well done!
Wow, thank you so much for your comment! I'm glad you enoyed the cartoon and agree with you about the score!
I say he's a fool because he doesn't learn from his mistakes and is always more than willing to share with others even if they will never understand or appreciate it. However I see your point about the girls as well!
Thank you for watching!
3/5!
Why the defensive Authours' Comments? This was pretty good!
I didn't feel that there was any problem with the sound at all.
This was an interesting mood piece - a fine example of a simple idea executed really well.
I really hope this DOES NOT get deleted!
Don't doubt yourself so much in future!
hey, that's nice of you, but i think the movie isn't perfect yet. thanks anyway ^^
5\5!
This was a brilliantly stylised cartoon! I was really surprised to come across somthing like this!
Graphics: Brilliantly drawn. Simple without being basic, and very easy one the eye.
Style: This was the strong point for me. I loved the "panel" layouts.
Sound: It's rare to find good quality audio AND good voice actors in a lot of flashes but you did it. Great job!
Violence: Nothing too over the top but again you added some neat touches like the agent dodgeing the punches.
Interactivity: Play button.
Humour: You obviously weren't going for big laugths with this so it sems pointless trying to rate it but there were a few moments with the guy with the sniper.
Overall: You did a bang up job! I'd love to see a continuation of this series! Well done!
5\5!
This was a really well made and enjoyable cartoon! The graphics were crispy, comical and nicley drawn. The sound was clear and free of static and popping (so many cartoons are ruined by bad recording!) and all the characters were instantley likable.
This should really be scoring higher than it is so I've given you top marks for everything to boost things up a bit!
I'll be looking out for part 2!
Well done!
I think that you ARE a funny man!
This was really unique! I wasn't sure if I was supposed to laugth at the end but I did. You captured the style of a graphic novel really well and I felt intrigued to know what would happen next.
You did a great job!
go ahead laugh, enjoy yourself.
YES!
An Alan Smithee classic!
He has made many.
"As regards to favoriting you "Sorbitol" Absolutely no chance!! You are a nice guy and have great cartoons but you are riddled with politically correct socialist activists and are sooo biased I would not dream of going "official" with you..."
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