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4\5!

Don't listen to the guy who was moaning about the pace and the music being too slow. It added a great atmosphere to the movie. I must admit when I saw it was a stick movie I thought I wouldn't like it but you've got the skill to bring the characters to life and make them look good.
Whatever bugs in the film people are talking about weren't present when I watched- it works fine!
Anyway, I'll let you get on and finish part two! PEACE!

JonBro responds:

I'm glad you understood the atmosphere I was going for! And the bugs they were talking about, they were there earlier, but I just fixed them.

Thanks! I've already started it!

5\5!

Top marks for everything!

MorrowDays responds:

Thank you!

Good effort!

You have a lot of potential.
My only suggestion would be to thicken the lines of your character.
Other than that it was good to see a submission with some effort put into it.
I can tell that you've got what it takes! Keep it up!

A-Wahl responds:

Thanx!

5\5!

Brilliant! You should send this to nickelodean tonight and ask for a job.

boinky33 responds:

They might sue me.

4\5!

There were some nice touched in this. I really enjoyed it!

Salone responds:

I'm glad you did.

5\5!

You cleary have what it takes to be a great animater. Although it was simple I thought it was quite an ambitious piece. Well done!

orv responds:

thanks a lot!

5\5

It's rare to see such skill on these pages.
If this was your first flash then you put alot of other users to shame!

RyanLloyd responds:

Hey thanks a lot for your kind comment. I have been watching newgrounds animations for over 3 years (I created a my new ryanlloyd account recently) and have always wanted to contribute, its great to do so and get such great comments.

This was my technically my second flash movie, my first, if it really counts, was a weather map animation in college. A map of the UK, with clouds floating over it etc. I created this animation for the final project, which was supposed to just demonstrate everything learnt during the course, only I over did it slightly :)

5\5

I never saw the original version but I really enjoyed this! Graphics were smooth and inventive with some nice touches like when they walk past the lights. There were also a couple of clever effects thrown in.
My only concern is the sound levels. I'm not sure if it was my computer but I could'nt hear some of the dialouge but had to turn down my speakers whenever there was a gun shot.
However, don't let me, or anybody else for that matter, put you off continuing the series. What you have achieved so far is awsome and it will only get better! PEACE!

shadowford responds:

The original was the same except there was no music

5\5

Pefect! Nothing more to say.

Roger-wilco responds:

Thanks friend!

5/5

Simply the best submission I've seen today. Thanks for all the hard work!

Quarl responds:

Wow, thanks. That means alot to me.

"As regards to favoriting you "Sorbitol" Absolutely no chance!! You are a nice guy and have great cartoons but you are riddled with politically correct socialist activists and are sooo biased I would not dream of going "official" with you..."

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